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The big haversack, rugged ,messy, mucky ,in shreds
agog for his per diem sojourn…
To gaze the flocks of colorful feathers,
to chase the on-road fellow riders.
Rows of dahlias and poppies,
lurking from balconies hails him..
He is enthralled and stupefied,
suddenly the brakes are applied..
jumping and bumping, now, on a shoulder- ride
A second slipped ,a familiar stroke he sipped
Aah!! it was the only one, the last one ,one last letter
and that too is now delivered..
Oh!! it left me empty ,it left me devoid
..and then there were none ,he ogled inside,
Hundreds of strokes flipped in his mind ,
Zillions of expressions did unwind,
dubious ,subtle,dialated eyes ,cheeks puffed up,
he captured those winks of triumph and cheer..
even the spells of grief and despair..
How wondrous he found himself , he carries so many mysteries around,
he escorts in, memories,colored ,hued
strings in, sometimes, what you just mused..
plays hopscotch ,runs,rides and comes to you across the miles
spine tingling he is ,together with him, rides both, the tears and the smiles…
Isn’t this a miracle ??
It comes from within the postman’s haversack magical …
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very beautifully written.I loved the lines,’Hundreds of strokes filled in his mind
zillions of expressions did mind.’.Great thoughts. All the best.
Heartfelt thanks for your words of appreciation,maám…keep dropping by 🙂
Wow this was too good…reloaded some memories from childhood into my brain… This was the first time I seriously tried to understand an English poem, and I loved it…
hey Ayushi,happy to see you here after such a long time..How have you been? I am glad that I didn’t make you scartch your head a lot to understand my poem..And I really loved your genuine feedback.Thanks a lot…keep stopping by..all smiles 🙂
succinct and beatiful indeed 🙂 All the best for BAT
Welcome to my nest Saro, your sparkling words brightened up my space…Heartfelt thanks ..hope to see you more of you on these pages… 🙂
Beautifully Written..takes me back to a journey in the past.
Glad to know that I could take you back to those wonderful days atleast fora few moments…many thanks for your appreciating words..they always boost me up..keep visiting 🙂
‘How wondrous he found himself , he carries so many mysteries around,’
Very perceptive, Odyzz. You seem to have a deep perception of human mind The levels of awareness n the composition has been portrayed so well.Reminds me of that haunting number–‘dakiya daak laya’
I feel privileged to have you as a friend.:)
Lovely!
Ahaa!! your affectionate words are just like an award to me..I drench myself in your words and feel as if I am a winner..you are an inspiration to me …The privilege and the pleasure is all mine to be your friend..A big Thanks to you from the bottom of my heart ,Di… 🙂
of course ‘dakiya daak laya ‘was one of my favourites ..I was very fond of writing long letters to my siblings and relatives…
Wonderful … loved the passage !!!
Glad to have you here ,Green speck..and many thanks for your encouraging words.. 🙂
The Postman – once upon a time, he could be seen everywhere, carrying letters and parcels, delivering life in all its colours. Now, he is a rare sight, at least in cities, where the typed word has taken over the handwritten one. And yet, there was a time when a visit from him would be wildly anticipated and awaited. Oh, those glorious days 🙂
Beautifully written!
Mixi (Here’s my BAT entry 🙂)
Warm welcome to my space, Mixi.You are absolutely right .those were indeed the glorious days.the essence of those handwritten letters use to add intimacy to relations…Thanks a lot for sharing your thoughts …keep dropping by 🙂
“together with him, rides both, the tears and the smiles…” simply beautiful, a postman himself is a carrier of memories and this post brought backmany wonderful memories… Marvelous write-up Odyzz!!
Aah!! You said it all ,Reshma..I am glad my words brought back some wonderful memories for you..I am thrilled by your words..keep stopping by.. 🙂
Great writing niche. All the best.
Welcome to my blog, marriagebooklin..I am humbled by your words..Thanks a bunch.. 🙂
That was beautiful. First time here and I am pleasantly surprised. 🙂 All the best for BAT.
Welocme to my space, Akshay…I am glad It was a pleasant surprise for you..Thanks a ton for your encouraging words…Keep visiting for more surprises.. 🙂
Nostalgic and so brimming with joy the poem was . . remarkable writing and perfect choice of words ! loved every line to quote a few . . brilliant in one word 🙂
Hey Maliny,I always look forward to your comments . your words always encourge me to give my best..you made my day ,dear…Thanks a lotttt…Do visit again .. 🙂
I was wondering at the phrase, ‘per diem’ for the usual connotation it carry but you used it so aptly. Lovely poem and it gives you a creative kick. Awesome!
Hi ! Saru, Thank you so much for sharing such an insightful thought..encouraging words coming from a writer as prolific as you are indeed an achivement for the mediocre writers as me…million thanks ..keep sharing your thoughts.. 🙂
that was really clever…:) and beautiful.
Your words of praise are even more beautiful…Thank you so much for your kind words…I am delighted..keep stopping by.. 🙂
It’s written beautifully.. Liked it so much……
Someone is Special
Hey SIS,Thanks a million for your precious time and and even more thanks for liking my effort…keep visiting 🙂
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Superb!!! a walk down the memory lane…:) wonderful play of words!!!
Akila
That is such a simple narration. I think most people know their postman on a first name basis yet I am not sure if we realize how simply he is entwined in our lives. I’m glad your poem touches so beautifully on the subject. Good Job!
Welcome Richi,your words touched my heart and my effort seems to be worthwhile ..thanks a bunch ..would love to see more of you on these pages…:)
smiles…nicely done…really nice rhythm in your piece…some interesting choice of language as well…per diem is very formal, yet not so much in others….
Hi Brian, Positive words coming from the writer of your stature is in itself an achievement…and they even inspire me to polish my writings..Thanks a lot..Do visit again 🙂
Interesting, postman conjures up so many imageries. The rapid flow of words reflect the postman’s urgency to dispose his wares to those eagerly waiting, when indeed the snail mail was the primary means of communication. Thank you.
Welcome to my space ,Madhuri..thanks a ton for sharing your valuable thoughts..keep visiting 🙂
ha..the title reminded me of a novel by agatha christie i read some years ago…really a dark one..and you brought back some nostalgia with the postman as well..
Yes ,Claudia..its been inspired form there itself..I am glad youliked my poem…keep dropping by..
Very beautiful lines on postman! True, he carries magic, memories and miracles !
I am humbled by your words of praise,Valli..I so look forward for your comments on my writings…Thanks a lotttt..keep sharing 🙂
HEY Odyzz.. My first time here. Sorry for being late.
But I was pleasantly surprised by this wonderful composition. Can’t point out a single thing. I loved many things about this poem. The use of words was appropriate and impeccable. Different emotions were described beautifully.
Hi Deepak,
Warm welcome to my nest..
No need to apologize for anything.. I am glad that my composition did not disappoint you in any ways..Words of appreciation from the poet of your stature gives me a sense of satiation..keep sharing your precious words on my writings.. I shall always look forward for them, my Gemini friend..
i belong to that era of handwritten letters. and how eagerly we waited for him everyday. all my family members and relatives stayed in the same small little town, so no question of anyone sending us letters but still we stopped him everyday, “anything for us?”
those letters were magical and so is this post!! even though i consider myself barely qualified to comment on a post like this but just want to say – i did understand this one 🙂
Deb, I jump with joy when you say that you could relate to what I have written ..my efforts were saved to have travelled to trash..your feedback keep me on toes to write better in a way that the reader is not disappointed in any ways..I cherish your presence on my space..keep stopping by..
P.S Sorry for the late reply