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Virgin raindrops pitter-patter
on the window panes,
silence within, pierces her heart
with excruciating pain..
Gazing at the rain-speckles
Slips into reverie of his fragrance..
Enigmatic smiles , sultry eyes
makes her heart dips on crests and troughs,
his satiny touches,strokes of caresses,
spur in, ecstatic waves of passion..
Honeyed whispers , scintillating desires,
slender fingers slide on the contours of her face
Velvety lips fervors, soundcloud of heart thunders,
mellow music made her syllables dance,
blazed intense furor,surged in, romance..
Left behind were the imprints of love
on her mind body and soul…
Crushed on the white linen were the satin red petioles
urgent call,Goodbye sweetheart ,he cajoles..
She wished he could have stayed with her for a while
She wished to surprise him on the day of the valentine..
Plunges out of the trance
her own skin at a glance ,
marks she traced ,then there were none
but on her soul there were still some….
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ODIzzEY 
Wonderful poem! The emotions expressed are moving. They come straight from the heart!! I loved the lines;
“left behind were the imprints of love
on her mind, body and soul”
“marks she traced ,then there were none
but on her soul there were still some….” full of emotions …. well written !!!
oo there is a nice bit of intimacy in here as well…without overplaying it as well…like the pain pane play as well towrd the beginning…those imprints can def stay wih you…smiles.
Very emotive and a sensual piece, Odyzz..There’s a rare grace in this poetry which delights and amazes every reader… beautiful!
Wonderful lines!
wow, this is brilliant writing!! i don’t know anything about poetry but i am sure, it’s an extremely difficult task to come up with a piece like this.
Nice symphony of passion,emotion &yearning….and then-reality!