Participating again in Wishlist Wednesday contest…..Hope you will enjoy reading it as I enjoyed writing it…
I wish I could touch…
…another life beyond my vision
….the blue yonder beyond the horizon
..Silence beyond the remotest echo
…the prelude beyond all impressions
….tears behind the laughters
…. dreams beyond seven colors
….the chastity beyond the crescent
…..the serenity beyond the shores
….the soul beyond seven heavens
….the candidness beyond the feigns
…the heart beyond words
…the expressions of eyes beyond elucidations
…the innocence beyond the worldly treasures
…the fragrance beyond all measures
…you beyond your existence
…me ,myself n I beyond my discreteness…
nice on the reaching out to the things that are not directly within our reach…a journey worth traveling for sure…smiles
p.s. just saw your comment at dVerse – the mr. linky for OpenLinkNight will go up at 3pm EST…see you in a bit..
Welcome to my nest Claudia.I am glad you enjoyed the journey through my words..Thanks a lot for your appreciating words…
I have posted my link..It’s been very kind of you to help me out.Hope to see you more on my pages..
This is beautiful !!!
Thanks a lot for your kind words,GS.
this is a brilliant piece!! wish i could find words for a fitting comment!
Hi! Deb ,Its always a pleasure to see you here with your “straight from heart” comments…I hope the poem isn’t so complicated this time that you had to re-read it and butcher your head to understand..( ** Glad **n **relieved** 🙂 )
Amen!!
Happy to see you here ,Sanjay Sir…Thanks a ton .. 🙂
Ohw!! This is wonderful. I loved all your dreams and liked the way you poetically described your dreams….esp loved these
..Silence beyond the remotest echo
dreams beyond seven colors
the heart beyond words
You touched the heart beyond words with your Ethereal verse Odyzz!! each line is so beautifully crafted…
SOOOOO nice and beautiful poem..touch the heart (:
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Those are indeed wonderful wishes!! I wish them FOR you as well.
Beautiful indeed! How smoothly the words are flowing from you pen. Loved reading it. Good luck!!
Welcome to my nest Usha maám…And thank you for such a wonderful feedback..looking forward to see you more.. 🙂
nice n axcillent