“Soft Zephyrs of Love” My entry for Get Published Contest

Blog Post Title : “Soft Zephyrs of Love”  My entry for Get Published Contest 

“Love is an emotion experienced by the many and enjoyed by the few.” – Author Unknown

Love in itself might not be bitter but it  seems so  when you have been bitten venomously by someone,and  your senses are paralyzed  to unravel the paths of true love even if it comes your way…

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Soft zephyrs of love, chills the  spine , shivers  every pore ,                                                              urge to feel that shiver, urge to be loved till the core.

With tormented heart and desolated state of mind she penned down these lines in her diary( this being the only pearl of her treasure she could secure with her) while en route  to an unfamiliar city where she was going to  rejuvenate herself holistically. One of her fellow traveler’s was ogling privily since the very moment she entered the compartment.He was an average looking young guy who was having a dialogue with his friends about love being all about getting nuts over  glamourous looks and Charismatic kohl smudged eyes,hanging out in coffee shops holding each other’s hand for hours and remain in romantic moods forever.

The writer lends all ears to the protagonists outcry and try hard to allay her griefs .Having paroxysm of anguish the writer is engulfed in tears to know that it’s an unanswerable quandary.

What’s the reason behind the protagonists grief and fears ? Who was that fellow traveler  observing her ?Did the protagonist had a conversation with the fellow traveler ?What were the spin and twirl in  the life of the characters? Did some absurd situations accumulate to bring them in another tumultuous situation?

Every story ends up either on happy notes or on the sad one’s but some of them on neither of the two, they end up on the real notes of life .The melancholy,the joy,the troubles of the characters ,the situations are all real.The protagonist is one of my best friends.(Name of the characters and locations will be changed )

This is my entry for the HarperCollins–IndiBlogger Get Published contest, which is run with inputs fromYashodhara Lal and HarperCollins India.

You can vote for me by clicking  on the picture below.Your vote really counts.Thanks in advanceZephyrs of love

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20 Comments

    • Having such a positive feedback from the writer of your stature gives immense pleasure to me..Thanks a ton for your wishes ..if you really wish to read the complete story kindly vote for me through indiblogger by clicking the pic at the end of the post ..Thanks a lot dear.. 🙂

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  2. odyzz…The human mind is such a wealth !!! You’ve written this extraordinary story of love, expectation and betrayal with passion, poignancy and elegance. Soul-stirring reality!
    All the best, odyzz…voted!

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