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HAIKU SEPTEMBER HEIGHTS #184 SLEEP BY: ADRIENNE
silence within ,
smelts mind icicles,
sleepless nights.
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ODIzzEY 
“Mind icicle” – brilliant 🙂
Beautiful…I did wonder for sometime..
RS:)
The first line really sets the tone.
Sorry to question –
do you mean smelts i.e. forges?
for me, silence within would melt mind icicles (which is great btw)
a chilling silence from without (from the sensei) would certainly smelt a few!
Awesome imagery here.
Love this one very much … the deeper meaning is so very strong.
smelts mind icicles
This is classic! Warming what’s cold within! Nicely Odyzz
Hank
Thought-provoking, different take on the prompt! I like it.
A very unique haiku today – I like it a lot.
Mind icicles… Love that image. I think tehy are the source of some of my sleepless nights.
smelt–a power verb for the frozen! Very nice indeed.
Brilliant
That second line is a powerful one ~
Well written…loved it:D
~Sayantini Bhattacharya
http://sayantini-bhattacharya.blogspot.in
Deep haiku kept me thinking for a while.
The 3 “S” sound at the beginning of each line and further on invites to be quiet…ssshhhh…
🙂
Oh that is my night!
Unfortunately, I am intimately acquainted with sleepless nights…
Sleep Behind Barred Windows