SEP25-HAIKU-SLEEP image courtesy deviantart.com HAIKU SEPTEMBER HEIGHTS #184 SLEEP BY: ADRIENNE silence within , smelts mind icicles, sleepless nights. Advertisements Share this:FacebookEmailGoogleLike this:Like Loading... Related 17 Comments “Mind icicle” – brilliant 🙂 Beautiful…I did wonder for sometime.. RS:) The first line really sets the tone. Sorry to question – do you mean smelts i.e. forges? for me, silence within would melt mind icicles (which is great btw) a chilling silence from without (from the sensei) would certainly smelt a few! Awesome imagery here. Love this one very much … the deeper meaning is so very strong. smelts mind icicles This is classic! Warming what’s cold within! Nicely Odyzz Hank Thought-provoking, different take on the prompt! I like it. A very unique haiku today – I like it a lot. Mind icicles… Love that image. I think tehy are the source of some of my sleepless nights. smelt–a power verb for the frozen! Very nice indeed. Brilliant That second line is a powerful one ~ Well written…loved it:D ~Sayantini Bhattacharya http://sayantini-bhattacharya.blogspot.in Deep haiku kept me thinking for a while. The 3 “S” sound at the beginning of each line and further on invites to be quiet…ssshhhh… 🙂 Oh that is my night! Unfortunately, I am intimately acquainted with sleepless nights… Sleep Behind Barred Windows I would love to have your feedback...... Cancel reply Enter your comment here... Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Email (required) (Address never made public) Name (required) Website You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Google+ account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Twitter account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Facebook account. ( Log Out / Change ) w Cancel Connecting to %s Notify me of new comments via email. Notify me of new posts via email.