SEP22-HAIKU-BIRTH Image courtesy Google Images HAIKU SEPTEMBER HEIGHTS #181 BIRTH BY: DULCINA In tears of solitude, she simpered and caressed her womb. Advertisements Share this:FacebookEmailGoogleLike this:Like Loading... Related 11 Comments You make it very thoughtful…one has to take a pause …and move on calmly…. I am here: http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2012/09/she-is-reborn-too.html RS:) Oh, my, this feels very sad. This is would be a sad day if she lost her baby ~ Sad and melancholy but also beautiful. How lonely and sad! Losing the unborn child … sad image … How sad! You have displayed the melancholy quite beautifully !!! Her baby will make her happy! She is not alone: another life is living inside her… 🙂 I like to think the tears are because she’s in pain. I saw a mom-to-be shedding tears during labor. Soon that will be forgotten once the baby is out. Written beautifully. Bloody tears conveys loss but the speciality of your haiku is that it can be interpreted differently 🙂 I would love to have your feedback...... Cancel reply Enter your comment here... Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Email (required) (Address never made public) Name (required) Website You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Google+ account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Twitter account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Facebook account. ( Log Out / Change ) w Cancel Connecting to %s Notify me of new comments via email. Notify me of new posts via email.