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HAIKU SEPTEMBER HEIGHTS #173 REVELATION BY:GERALDINE
The sapless arid,
embossed footsteps,
turbulent heart.
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ODIzzEY 
Wow ! I like this a lot… Says a lot…
Easy wings flutter to the Sun
Expressing so much emotion! I like it!
Well I sat thinking..and enjoyed it…. RS:)
I sense a lot of emotion in this one, although I think that I don’t really understand this one, because of the use of the words … which I don’t know all … English isn’t my maiden language. But the emotion is strong which I feel in this one, maybe the feeling is triggered by the picture … but … well it’s a nice verse.
Traces of a lonely walk on the beach… That reveals a lot. Lovely!
A very strong Haiku. We can but hope that other foot steps followed beside these.
Melanie
I like the turbulent heart…nice one ~
Intriguing, to say the least 🙂 Emotional too.
I like the “embossed footprints” and feel the sadness here.
A slow walk on the beach, would certainly help soothe the inner self! Nicely, Odyzz!
Hank
A revelation of strong emotions! Well done.
nice write, had to mull it over for a while like it when that happens
turbulent heart indeed.
Turbulent heart — i liked this 🙂
powerful and full of emotion. Very well crafted.
Ditto what a few commentators wrote…..I had to reread and think….and I think I really like it!