SEP14-HAIKU-FOOTSTEPS Image courtesy Google Images HAIKU SEPTEMBER HEIGHTS #173 REVELATION BY:GERALDINE The sapless arid, embossed footsteps, turbulent heart. Advertisements Share this:FacebookEmailGoogleLike this:Like Loading... Related 16 Comments Wow ! I like this a lot… Says a lot… Easy wings flutter to the Sun Expressing so much emotion! I like it! Well I sat thinking..and enjoyed it…. RS:) I sense a lot of emotion in this one, although I think that I don’t really understand this one, because of the use of the words … which I don’t know all … English isn’t my maiden language. But the emotion is strong which I feel in this one, maybe the feeling is triggered by the picture … but … well it’s a nice verse. Traces of a lonely walk on the beach… That reveals a lot. Lovely! A very strong Haiku. We can but hope that other foot steps followed beside these. Melanie I like the turbulent heart…nice one ~ Intriguing, to say the least 🙂 Emotional too. I like the “embossed footprints” and feel the sadness here. A slow walk on the beach, would certainly help soothe the inner self! Nicely, Odyzz! Hank A revelation of strong emotions! Well done. nice write, had to mull it over for a while like it when that happens turbulent heart indeed. Turbulent heart — i liked this 🙂 powerful and full of emotion. Very well crafted. Ditto what a few commentators wrote…..I had to reread and think….and I think I really like it! I would love to have your feedback...... Cancel reply Enter your comment here... Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Email (required) (Address never made public) Name (required) Website You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Twitter account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Facebook account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Google+ account. ( Log Out / Change ) Cancel Connecting to %s Notify me of new comments via email. Notify me of new posts via email.