SEP8-HAIKU-LETTERS

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There was a hesitation in posting this haiku ..I am unable to understand whether it justifies today’s prompt or not.kindly advice..

SEPTEMBER HAIKU HEIGHTS #167   RENDER    BY: FIDUCIA

waiting to be dropped

Letters,unnerved me ,marred me

heart in transit.

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9 Comments

  1. This was a very hard prompt to work with since Render is an ambiguous word for most of us – and one we do not use often. I find sometimes going to the thesaurus helps me get a better feel for the words the threads of meaning.
    And that said – excellent haiku!
    I enjoyed your inspiration in meeting this challenge. Well done!

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