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There was a hesitation in posting this haiku ..I am unable to understand whether it justifies today’s prompt or not.kindly advice..


waiting to be dropped

Letters,unnerved me ,marred me

heart in transit.



  1. This was a very hard prompt to work with since Render is an ambiguous word for most of us – and one we do not use often. I find sometimes going to the thesaurus helps me get a better feel for the words the threads of meaning.
    And that said – excellent haiku!
    I enjoyed your inspiration in meeting this challenge. Well done!

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