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ODIzzEY 
hmhm…. Just a thought, i felt that if you tone down the bright yellow of the pages, it would be much easier to read.
Cheers.
sorry for the inconvenience,Sir.Thanks a lot for the feedback..I have tried making changes in the background color… hope it works.
Keep sharing
This was too beautiful 🙂
Thank you so much ..Green Speck 🙂
Very beautifully worded in to poetry. Superb penning.
Thanks a lot Pramod..good to know that u liked the poetry..I was actually worried before posting thinking whether I will be able to meet the standards or not….
What a way to write a poem. Beautifully written! Particularly the last paragraph is just awesome.. Keep writing.. Good Luck for BAT!
Someone is Special
What a way to encourage your fellow bloggers ..? and to reassure them that they can write better…you have kept the spark alive in me to write more…thanks a ton..keep encouraging…
Fascinating and deeply riveting.
The very first para touched the chord….and this went till the last.:)) Beautiful…
Permit me to address you as Panchali di…um really blessed to have such wonderful comments from the writers of your stature…Thanks a lot and welcome to my space…keep leaving your footprints now and then…
truly loved it 🙂
ATB for BAT 🙂
i could not participate…but u can see my post here
Karan – Strangers in the Night
Thanks Karan ,and welcome..:)
very touching! all the best for BAT!
Welcome to my space and Thanks for your words of praise,.. Dishit ,,keep visiting..
Very touching and beautifully penned !
welcome to my blog and thanks a ton for a lovely comment..even you pen down your thoughts so beautifully…I need to learn a lot from you and my fellow bloggers..
Highly evocative. Great job. Very relevant issues raised.
Was really looking forward for your comment ..and you made my day…um overjoyed to know that you liked it ..Thanks a lot ,a lot ,Karthik and welcome to my space.um still learning from you and so many bloggers around.. ..keep visiting
Man! I had to refer to the dictionary so many times. You have great vocab.
Very nice poem. Though some of the words were a bit above my head, I was able to get the hanf of it. However, I did not get the issue in the last stanza. Please elaborate. Sorry. Asking a writer to explain his work is bad.. but I want to understand this beautiful peom word-to-word.
First off Welcome to my blog and next I sincereley apologize that u were perplexed after reading my poetry…I need to keep a check from next time..
Now as far as the last stanza is considered..It was a simple definition of a “stranger”(prayers +thoughts+dreams+feelings churned together and an image is created )…
when one is in any sort of difficulty knowingly or unknowingly one starts praying ,either with words or just with feelings expecting some miracle to happen ,expecting somone to come and sort the things to simplify the equation of life…That is how I tried defining the starnger…
I am really not sure If I have been able to convey it correctly….do let me know if the confusion is still there..
Tons of thanks for a wonderful comment..I shall look forward for more ..
Buddy! You must be crazy if you’re thinking you lacked something. Everybody in the room understands except me… so – this is where the fault lies. In fact, I realize, I have been behaving dumb on a number of posts this BAT.
I get your last stanza now… and I think the poem is even more beautiful. Kaise likhte ho yaar?? 😛
Another thing – your blog layout and template is very neat. I really felt nice visiting the page.
have a good day. 🙂
excellent poetry..brings images into mind
Welcome to Odizzey and Thanks a lot ,Tomz
That`s a bitter sweet post. Correct me if i`m wrong but I think that was the intent.
I just tried to pour down my feelings touching the reality…and this is how it came out…
Welcome to odizzey and thanks a ton for sharing your thoughts…
Nice poem 🙂 Especially, the recurring line..
Thank you so very much Rajkiran…
Welcome to my space..keep visiting
muddling mind ,stirring soul
lurking dreams,aphonic lure
all puddles and what is poured ?
Absolutely Loved it!
And I absolutely loved your comment…welcome and many many thanks for your lovely thoughts…